Posted: September 20, 2010 in Poetry
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Isn’t it enough, I see it through?

Shouldn’t I think more, you too?

Wouldn’t I know the mind is closed?

Questions and answers both imposed.

Hadn’t I thought I could lift the veil?

Surreal and then both turning pale

Couldn’t you just walk some more?

 Hand in hand maybe till the door.

Couldn’t I see beyond that mist?

Think it all over and seek the gist

Can I not just leave some clues?

Wipe it away and call it blues.

Isn’t it been a long undone?

You would be glad when I’m gone

Share it some more, watch the smiles

For I will be there, a few more miles

Picture me sing and shed a tear

Knowing me more, far than near

Set it all up and break the ring

Feel the deep bite and the sting

You know me now, I live life full

Join the ride, feel the tug and pull

Spreading my joy and take the bliss

Capture my heart and say as is

Flashing night signs, aurora borealis

Stealing a glance and a deep wet kiss

Somewhere deep down, I must go

Clarity now seems just a show

Feel the right touch and say it’s true

In so many ways we let it brew

Cresting on waves with more nuance

You would just say it’s all clairvoyance …


For Onestoppoetry/ Oneshotwednesday

  1. Thank you Robin & Jingle for stopping by to read.

  2. moondustwriter says:

    Strong one. I can hear the sense of futility

    thanks for sharing with One Shot

    smiles from the Moon

  3. brian says:

    oh i will join that ride..marvelous flow…to this one…clairvoyance, maybe…smiles. nice one shot!

  4. Nick Rolynd says:

    I love how it takes on a new dimension as soon as you see “clairvoyance.” Really great work. =3

  5. dustus says:

    Nice flow to the poem and love the ending rhyme. “Flashing night signs, aurora borealis / Stealing a glance and a deep wet kiss” Lovely image those lines conjure. One Shot cheers!

  6. Suja says:

    Thanks Gautami..welcome to my pages :)

    Adam thank you for liking it..also thanks for liking photography :)

    Nick : Thank you :)

    Brian thank you for liking ;)

    Leslie thank you :)

  7. Eric says:

    Clair who? (LOL!)

    Nice One Shot!

  8. Gay Cannon says:

    I thought this was very clever. It was like running with your stream of consciousness, that devising conversation we internally invent that we think we’ll say someday, or they’ll say, or think, and you brought the poetry right back. Well done. Gay @beachanny

  9. Thanks Eric :)

    Thanks Gay..happy to get your feedback here…Internal conversations are very interesting if given a form with words :)

  10. Olivia says:

    Very strong.. a nicely woven one..
    Greetings, friend!!
    It is Monday, I sincerely invite you to join us for a Monday Poetry Potluck party, bring in 1 to 3 poem treats to share, and have fun tasting other poets treats.
    You will have 60 hours enjoying the fun.
    Hurry up, the more you share, the happier we are.
    Hope to see you in our party, hurry up, the earlier you are in, the more traffic you get…
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  11. Thank you Olivia for stopping by.
    Unfortunately I am in the middle of moving and settling in so not much time to read or write now…but will join in the party eventually. Thanks a bunch for the invite!

  12. dan says:

    Wonderful flow. The rhyming scheme was just right. The ending perfect. Great poem.

  13. alakaline says:

    very fluid.. and nice rhyme..

  14. Thanks Dan and alakaline for liking it!